Second Crack After Brutal Feedback (Picture Included)

[JRizzle]

After receiving feedback from my first approach I have decided to take the advice and change tact. 
I know the my backs are a little weak and I am yet to lock in my rookies which will be depending on first round line ups.
I have two concerns - Back and Wright

Kitty - $142.6

Previous advice was a complete rebuild and this is the outcome.
Pick it apart people.

[carlton]

Im not a fan of 2 defenders in the strating lineup up especially if its not KK and Mcdonald.

Geogiou- who ??????

Downgrade savage to a cheaper option Martin/polec/dunstan

Prefer Thomas over Shuey as he is a must at his price and will also free up some cash

Not sure on ryder and would upgrade to a better premo

Also could downgrade Wright to a rookie but thats your choice

Overall 7/10

Cheers mate check out my team

http://forum.fanfooty.com.au/index.php/topic,90285.0.html