Please give me critscim

[Gunna Win]

TEAM NAME: Thoughts?
DEF: K. Simpson, G. Birchall, P. Seedsman, T. Greene, B. Waters, M. Scharenberg (D. Gardiner, J. Bews)
MID: J. Selwood, T. Liberatore, N. Fyfe, T. Cotchin, M. Murphy, D. Beams, J. Aish, D. Tyson (J. Martin, X. Ellis)
RUC: M. Kreuzer, A. Sandilands (D. Currie, L. McBean)
FWD: T. Rockliff, C. Dixon, S. Motlop, D. Thomas, A. Fasolo, V. Michie (T. Banfield, J. Hogan)
CASH LEFT: $85,300

I think I have managed my risks well with my premiums and I think it looks like a good team let me know you thoughts.

[Levis43]

Good looking team. Only concern is that your forward line looks a little weak. :P

[Gunna Win]

yeah it does but I think I make up for it in others places and I don't really like any of the premium forwards this year apart from Rocky

[Ricochet]

Very very unique team mate, and I like it. A lot of players with improvement and price increases in them

[Holz]

your issue is you want a team ideally with the top 8 backs/forwards and top 10 mids. top

i count

Simpson Birchall
Selwood Beams  (Cotchin Fyfe iffy)
Kreuzer (iffy)
Rocky (mid only)

the thing is its boring but you will want Mcveigh, Walker, Ablett, Pendles, Swan, Watson, Goldy, Martin etc... not sure you have the trades to brign them in.

also sandi will give you problems.

i would drop a mid premo and spend the cash to turn a few of your guys into super premos. Still keep some of your uniques in libba fyfe cotchin kreuz etc... but i would get rid of one of seedsman/greene for a solid backman. If you want to keep 6 premo mids maybee aish to dunstan and fasolo to kerston to free up some cash .

[Gunna Win]

thanks for the feed back guys I like my structure of the team with very strong mids and then two strong forwards and backs if Rockliff doesn't keep hes dpp I will have to completely change my team around but thatnks guys your thoughts have been noted

[Gunna Win]

TEAM NAME: Thoughts?
DEF: K. Simpson, G. Birchall, T. McKenzie, T. Greene, B. Waters, M. Scharenberg (D. Gardiner, J. Bews)
MID: J. Selwood, T. Liberatore, N. Fyfe, T. Cotchin, M. Murphy, D. Beams, J. Aish, D. Tyson (J. Martin, X. Ellis)
RUC: B. Grundy, B. Longer (D. Currie, L. McBean)
FWD: T. Rockliff, C. Dixon, J. Gunston, S. Motlop, D. Thomas, V. Michie (T. Banfield, J. Hogan)
CASH LEFT: $23,200

Made my rucks cheaper and got a stronger forward and backline

[quinny88]

TEAM NAME: Thoughts?
DEF: K. Simpson, G. Birchall, T. McKenzie, T. Greene, B. Waters, M. Scharenberg (D. Gardiner, J. Bews)
MID: J. Selwood, T. Liberatore, N. Fyfe, T. Cotchin, M. Murphy, D. Beams, J. Aish, D. Tyson (J. Martin, X. Ellis)
RUC: B. Grundy, B. Longer (D. Currie, L. McBean)
FWD: T. Rockliff, C. Dixon, J. Gunston, S. Motlop, D. Thomas, V. Michie (T. Banfield, J. Hogan)
CASH LEFT: $23,200

Made my rucks cheaper and got a stronger forward and backline

As holz said earlier I think this team is needing way to much upgrading.
Your rucks are going to be hard to ever upgrade because the guys on the bench won't be making money so your probably better having at least one premium ruck.
It makes sense to go cheap in the forward line but I think there are better value players than the ones you have chosen. Can you really see all of Dixon, gunston and Motlop going 100+?
I like the idea you're going with but I think your choice of players could do with some tweaking

[johnnytheboy1]

Def : If you want scharenberg in your team put him on the bench as he won't beat out Seedsman or Marley Williams. Look for a rookie who will start. There are surely better optionsthan T.Greene Matt Suckling is an alternative
Mids: Spent most on your cash here is 6 premiums maybe 1 too many and also both Missing Ablett & Pendles
Rucks need 1 premium here even if it is Sandilands or Leuenberger
Fwds: I would look at Pavlich or Nic Nat instead of Dixon apart from that should be good

Overall this team needs improving as qinny88 has stated some of the forwards are not going to score 100's consistently.
give it a 7/10