c'mon guys please help me

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I made a few changes based on some suggestions from earlier, what are your thoughts now guys? please help me

B  goddard, enright, h shaw, hodge, hunt, malceski, b waters
(maguire, silvagni)

M swan, mitchell, watson, masten, d martin, barlow
(bastinac, shuey)

R  m clark, hille
(trengrove, roughhead)


F Reiwoldt, o'keefe, harvey, zieball, rockliff, goodes, higgins
(hitchcock, gumbleton)

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pretty please  :-*