need some help, would really appreciate it fellas

[jakeoner1]

backs: goddard, shaw, newman, waters, lake, dempsey, morris (tomilson, bugg)
mids: pendles, ablett, boyd, selwood, coniglio, ledger, (shiel(if selected), magner)
rucks: cox, giles (redden, big o)
fwds: franklin, fyfe, martin, dangerfield, porps, smith, smedts ( kennedy, saad)

any improvement needed here?

[johnnytheboy1]

Backs: Taken a few Risks here i think you should save money and downgrade Dempsey or Lake to a rookie
Mids: Superb midfield great premiums Ledger should be a good pick.
Rucks: Many will have Giles as R2 and whatever loss you have you should make up with the 4th Mid Premium
Fwds: Exxcellent but prefer Kennedy at F7

Overall Apart from the few risks you have taken in defence your team looks good. I give it a 7.5/10

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[DCAK]

Like it mate 8/10

Deep midfield as I would expect with 1 x prem ruck.  Good luck.

[tor01doc]

Newman a nice alternative to Lids who you'll get for less later.
Same goes for Swan before Pendles IMO.
Waters can hurt himself a littel too often for my liking.
You may be better not having 3 risky types in there. 2 max and maybe even just 1 of Lake, Waters or Dempsey.

If you trade those guys ie Pendles -> Swan / 2 of the 3 to rookies you'll have heaps of money to get a fourth premium back and maybe even upgrade another.

Nice though if it all works.