My 2nd crack - rate it

[DT101]

Backs: B.Goddard H.Shaw B.Deledio G.Broughton J.Grimes M.Clarke T.Mohr    Emg: B.Smedts B.Wilkes
Mids: S.Pendlebury G.Ablett J.Bartel M.Barlow K.Horsley D.Shiel     Emg: J.McDonald E.Kavanagh
Rucks: A.Sandilands J.Giles     Emg: S.Rowe O.Stephensen
Forwards: L.Franklin N.Fyfe D.Martin J.Lewis S.Sidebottom J.Brown A.Treloar     Emg: D.Zorko S.Kerridge

any comments?