PLEASE RATE!! 1st attempt feedback needed

[slippery gypsy]

BACKS - enright, goddard, shaw, deledio, m. clarke, docherty, b. ellis (smedts, l.brown)
MIDS - swan, ablett, mitchell, barlow, b. mckenzie, j. macdonald (d.sheil, s. kerridge)
RUCKS - leuenberger, mumford (giles, stephensen)
FORWARDS - franklin, goodes, fyfe, martin, j. brown, d. pfeifer, a. treloar (t.walsh, zorko)

$6, 300 left
FEEDBACK this is my first attempt!

[eggzmen]

its gonna be a long year with forwards like that bobby, don't think either j.brown or fyfe will fire this year, other than that looks pretty good. 7/10 bruz

[eggzmen]

btw guys, he's lying this isnt his first attempt, hes been doing this for 5+ years, silly